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Some people say that schools should teach good behavior to children and introduce them to right and wrong. Parents should not only be the ones responsible. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#people #schools #behavior #children #right #parents #ones
A part of the population believes that both schools and
parents
 should be
responsable
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responsible
 for teaching children how to behave and how to make the difference between what is good and what is bad. I think it depends on
circumstances
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the circumstances
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. The first consideration is human connection.
The friendships
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Friendships
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 and
kids
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kids'
kid's
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 relationships are mostly formed in academic environments, so are formed at school. Individuals
beleve
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believe
 that teachers,
as well as
parents
 ,are
responsable
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responsible
 for those relations and,
in addition
, schools should provide education in
this
 direction. I believe that
parents
 can control how their
child
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children
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 act when they are around, but in academic institutions , teachers should take the family role and teach
youngs
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young
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 what is right and what is wrong. Considering the
respect
 they have for others, family is the
palece
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place
palace
 where they learn
this
 value. In the first 7 years of life, peers
undertand
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understand
 their
socially
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social
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 limits and how much
respect
 they should have for different age groups. Teachers are not
responsable
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responsible
 for
this
 aspect,
becuse
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because
this
 skill is learned earlier in life.
For example
, a mother should teach her boy to speak with
respect
with
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to
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 an old lady.
Moreover
, I think most of the skills related to
respoct
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respect
 are learned in
first
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the first
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 7
yoears
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years
 of life.
Therefore
,
parents
 are the only
one
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ones
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responsable
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responsible
 for them. In conclusion,
while
 I
beleve
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believe
 that both
parents
 and schools should teach peers how to act with other children , I think that
respect
 is learned only in families.
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