Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising chilren and less on teir working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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are argue

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that females are

good

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better

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in look

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at looking

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after

youngers

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younger

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than males.

Therefore

,

mothers

should focus

their

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on their

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house

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housework

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works than

that

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of

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on

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their professional lives. I

am totally agree

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with

this

statement because, when

comparison

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with women's

skills

and attitudes, they have more soft

skills

than men.

Furthermore

,

according to

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my point of view,

farthers

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fathers

furthers

have more

strenth

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strength

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than

mothers

to enhance the

family

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family's

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finacial

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financial

states

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state

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. In

this

essay will discuss,

mothers

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how mothers

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are the best to guide their children until grow up

them

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apply

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. Regarding soft

skills

, like kindness and peace, ladies are

being

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in

frount

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front

of the line and they are able to deal with babies in any

situations

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situation

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. Not only that, they have strong in mind to face any difficulties

for instance

stay

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sleepless

night

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at night

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with their sick infants

as well as

youngers

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younger

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.

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ones.

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Moms are the best lawyers when handling family matters

in

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wisely

according to

girls and boys. The nutritional value of the children

also

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vital.

in contrast

, females are the

chif

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chief

chef

of the cheap in the family

naturaly

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naturally

.

On the other hand

, they are good

listners

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listeners

, when kids come with

varies

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types of problems they listen to them with patience and

finally

solve them successfully. Regarding

occupation

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carrier of

the

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women, they are not strong enough to handle some

kind

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kinds

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of jobs and limited to for

exsamples

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example

examples

, teaching, nursing and

clarical

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clerical

classical

works

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work

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.

However

,men have more

capasity

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capacity

of

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for

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their

works

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work

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and if they work hard, they will go

the

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to the

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highest

possitions

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positions

easily and

able

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to earn lots of money that help to overcome the

finacial

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financial

difficulties

of

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at

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the

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home.

In addition

to that, males are less

patience

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.

This

has

proved

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been proved

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by the

researches

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research

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and there are studies mentioned that

,

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mens

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men

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have been

training

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trained

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to find

foods

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food

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and protect their family from hazarders

while

women

care

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have cared

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of

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for

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their juwelings since the

initiate

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of

human

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humans

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. In

conclution

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conclusion

, if fathers take care of their children, I

beleive

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believe

that

this

job is most suitable for

mothers

as they have soft

skills

.

Finally

, I agree with the idea

in

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that

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mothers

should stay with their

chilren

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children

and let fathers earn money

for

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to

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fulfill

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fulfil

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the family day to day requirements.