The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates rates of world illiteracy
according to
gender in six
regions
in the
last
year.
Overall
,
it is clear that
three
regions
,
such
as South
Asia
, the Arab States and
Sub-Saharah
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Sub-Saharan
Africa, had the highest proportion of people who could not read and write, and the percentage of women was considerably more than men. South
Asia
, the Arab States and Sub-Saharah Africa had the most significant impact on world illiteracy, accounting for about 40% in average for the
population
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,
while
the remaining
regions
,
such
as East
Asia
/Oceania, Latin America/ the Caribbean and developed countries, made up under one fifth from the total. Women, who cannot write and read, accounted for about half in three of the most illiterate
regions
, whilst men made up one-third. In stark contrast, developed countries and Latin America/ the Caribbean had a slight difference between these groups.
However
, in East
Asia
/ Oceania, there was a significant difference between women and men, accounting for 20% and 8%, respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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