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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. Do you agree or disagree?

#year #languages #people #life #world
Some
languages
 become out of use or fade away completely
as a result
 of different factors. Some hold the notion that it is not so serious as it would be even beneficial if
people
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 few international
languages
 worldwide. I fully agree with
this
 view since there are several benefits
people
 can enjoy.
To begin
 with, having international
languages
 is a huge plus in understanding
people
 in communication worldwide. The most vital point in communicating in the same
language
 is that it can lead to an
excell
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excel
excellent
 in science and technology since scientists can share their ideas and activities with each other without worrying about
language
 barriers. Advances in technology because of some plus points of using the same
language
, in turn, can
also
 make
people
's lives more easy. Having access to a plethora of information and understanding almost anything written, since there are only
few
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 international communication tools, are other merits that
people
 can have.
People
 can be able to explore anything
through
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 reading articles online. As a good example, in most cases,
people
 struggle to find information in their own native
language
,
however
, they fail or may not feel satisfied, so reaching
to
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 any kind of information in international
languages
 that most
people
 know is very critical.
Additionally
, since most
people
 understand each other well and communicate freely, travelling would be
very
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 safe, interactive and common activity.
People
 can be able to travel to any
destionation
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destination
 without the fear of
language
 barriers. In conclusion, having few
languages
 brings many advantages, so I feel that it would be better if
people
 could communicate with each other without difficulties.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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