Some peole believe that it is best to accept a bad situation. Such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both points and express your opinion.

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can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that unpleasant situations are inevitable in life and

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they are difficult to cope with

such

as financial problems and unrewarding professions. Some say that it is a must to accept these hardships as they are

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others believe that there has to be a practical attitude for making more effort to overcome the challenges.I would argue that the second group has a better point of view

due to

the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, acceptance of any difficulties can make a contribution to upholding an ordered lifestyle as it occupies an axial role in having a

high quality

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living.

Following

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idea, some people persuade themselves to postpone their responsibility.

As a result

, it can lead to not making all attempts at doing their chores.

According to

a survey conducted by Tehran University, only clinging to a positive mindset, not only can be preventive, but

also

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can be harmful

for

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anyone’s

fulfillment

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.

On the other hand

, perseverance is an integral part of

successful

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life. What it means is that

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it’s of paramount importance to put all your efforts to achieve your desired purposes.

Hence

, laziness serves as a barrier to all your wishes. To cite an example, if you want to immigrate to a foreign country, you have to do

all

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your best to get an acceptable score on the IELTS Exam. As far as I am concerned, diligence performs a key role in enhancing

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level of our life. What it means is that effort paves the way for financial well-being and everyone has to burn his midnight oil to reach his objectives.

To sum up

, I would say that unsatisfactory jobs and

shortage

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a shortage

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of money can have detrimental effects on our lives. There are two opposite approaches towards

this

issue. I believe that it would be a better idea to try your best rather than just

accepting

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those conditions.