WRITE A LETTER TO THE SOCIAL WORKER ,MS JENNIFER ADAMS AT THE COMMUNITY HEALTH NURSE REQUESTING FOLLOW UP CARE.
I am writing to refer Mr.Martin who is suffering from mental
ill
and committed Replace the word
illness
to attempt
suicide.He requires your urgent attention and care Verb problem
apply
.now
he is ready to discharge your care.
Mr.Martin was admitted on 13 October 2009 following Correct your spelling
Now
overdose
intake of mogodol.During Correct article usage
an overdose
hospitalizatin
,he is on steady progress.Currently ,he has depression and Correct your spelling
hospitalisation
on
medication.On observation he was physically impaired and presently, he is using Add a missing verb
is on
wheelchair
for mobility.Add an article
a wheelchair
In
addition
health education on diabetes was provided to manage his condition.
Mr.Martin lives with his wife .He is a heavy smoker and a social drinker .He lost a huge amount in gambling and Add a comma
addition,
end
up in Wrong verb form
ended
dept
which may be the reason for his depression.He is feeling guilty about Correct your spelling
debt
suicide
attempt .He expresses his desire to overcome his Add an article
a suicide
the suicide
addition
.He has a history of diabetes and Correct your spelling
addiction
proriasis
.
kindly provide Correct your spelling
psoriasis
an
urgent attention to overcome his depression .Please assist him Remove the article
apply
to participate
in any gambling Change preposition
in participating
addition
action group and quitline group for smoke cessation .I would highly appreciate it Correct your spelling
addiction
,
if you could help him Remove the comma
apply
for
Change preposition
with
monthly
Correct article usage
a monthly
follow up
appointment with Add a hyphen
follow-up
psychologist
.Encourage him to participate in social sports activities eg.lawn bowls.Add an article
a psychologist
the psychologist
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