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The given bar chart illustrates how many households owned and rented places in England and Wales during the period of 93 years.

The given bar chart illustrates how many households owned and rented places in England and Wales during the period of 93 years.
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represent
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represents
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that
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the
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number
 of
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families
family
familys
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families
whos
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who
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 lived in owned and rented
accomodations
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accommodations
accommodation
 in
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England
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england
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England
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 and
wales
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Wales
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 in the years 1918 to 2011 in
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general
genral
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general
, the
most
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largest
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number
 of
households
was
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lived in rented
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accommodation
accomodation
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accommodation
,
while
 the least
number
 of
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families
familys
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families
family
was
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owned
owened
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owned
 house
Firestly
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Firstly
,the peak of
households
 was lived in rented
accomdtion
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accommodation
 by almost 80
thousands
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 in 1918 ,
then
 we can see the
number
 of them declined
10000
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 in 1939 and remained steady during 1953 .
however
,they
were
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dramaticly
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dramatically
 decreased during the period till 2011, the numbers of them were 50,40 and 30
thousands
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thousand
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 in 1971 ,1981 and 1991 ,
respectivly
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respectively
,
then
 remained at 30000 in 2001,
at the end
 of
period
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the period
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 the
households
 in rented
accomodation
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accommodation
was almost 40
thousandos
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thousand
thousands
.
Secondly
, the
households
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number of households
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 lived in owned homes was above 20000 in 1981 ,
then
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their
thier
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their
number
 rose to 30
thousands
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thousand
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 in 1939 and
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remained
reamained
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remained
 steady in
in
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1953 ,in the year 1961 they
were
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shaply
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sharply
shapely
 increased till the year 1991 , the
households
 in
owned
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the owned
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 house
was
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about 35000 at
ehe
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the
 end of
period
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the period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, households with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrates
  • households
  • owned
  • rented
  • trend
  • shift
  • steadily
  • increased
  • declined
  • majority
  • gradual
  • percentage
  • homeowners
  • renters
  • prominent
  • attributed
  • affordability
  • availability
  • mortgage loans
  • initiatives
  • government
  • housing preferences
  • financial situations
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