The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The provided map illustrates information regarding two possible places in order to build a new supermarket in the town of Garlsdon.
Overall
, both of the suggested places are conveniently accessible to customers Linking Words
due to
their proximity to a railway and main roads.
Linking Words
Firstly
, the first proposed location, S1 is situated on the outskirts of the town between the cities of Hindson and Bransdon. Hindson is located 12 km from the store and has a population of 10,000 people, Linking Words
while
Bransdon is 16 km away and has a population of 15,000 people. The houses in the north and the industrial areas of the northwest are closer to S1. Linking Words
Although
it is far from the city centre and other parts of Garlsdon, it benefits from its convenient access to main roads and a railway, making it easily reachable for customers.
Linking Words
Secondly
, another potential location for the supermarket is between Brandson, with 15,000 individuals and Crandson has 29,000 people. Linking Words
This
location is situated in the city centre, making it closer to all parts of the town, including industrial and residential housing. It is easily accessible via both a highway and a railroad. Linking Words
Additionally
, there are no traffic restrictions in Linking Words
this
area, making it suitable for customers to commute to the supermarket in their own vehicles.Linking Words
Submitted by zuleykhaaliyeva223 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
▼