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The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2015 to 2035. Production of Grains (2015–2035) Grain20152020202520302035 Wheat100105107108110 Barley50708090100 Maize3434.534.53535 Rice24.724.324.52525.5 The quantities shown are in million metric tons.

The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2015 to 2035. Production of Grains (2015–2035) Grain20152020202520302035 Wheat100105107108110 Barley50708090100 Maize3434.534.53535 Rice24.724.324.52525.5 The quantities shown are in million metric tons.
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The provided table illustrates data regarding the production of four distinct grains, measured in
million
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 metric
tons
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, spanning from 2010 to 2015, and includes forecasts up to 2030. In general, it is evident that
barley
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 experienced the most substantial growth during the examined years and is
also
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 expected to have the highest production figures in the future.
Conversely
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,
wheat
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 demonstrated a gradual increase over the same period,
while
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 maize and rice remained relatively stable, with minor fluctuations. Specifically focusing on
barley
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 and
wheat
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, the data indicates a rise of 20
million
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 metric
tons
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 for
barley
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 and 5
million
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 metric
tons
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 for
wheat
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 between 2010 and 2015.
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, it is projected that
barley
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 will witness an additional increase of 30
million
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 metric
tons
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 in the next 15 years,
while
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wheat
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 is expected to grow by only 5
million
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 metric
tons
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 during the same period.
On the contrary
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, maize and rice production appear to exhibit minimal changes. By 2030, both grains are anticipated to have increased by approximately 1
million
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 metric
tons
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 since 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tons, barley, wheat with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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