some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skill than those who prefer to watch TV. What extent do you agree or disagree?
It has always been argued that
infividuals
may improve their imagination and dialect Correct your spelling
individuals
skill
with the help of reading Fix the agreement mistake
skills
books
than
watching television. I partially agree with Rephrase
rather than
this
given statement and this
essay shall shed light upon my perspective in subsequent paragraphs.
Foremost, why reading books
is an
important? Change the article
apply
This
is because of
it can develop reading Change preposition
apply
skill
and Fix the agreement mistake
skills
people
might learn vocabulary words. To elaborate, when humans pay more concentration to read
magazines or academic Wrong verb form
reading
books
, they could enchace
their Correct your spelling
enhance
skill
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skills
such
as
the speed of reading can proliferate Change preposition
apply
along
with
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apply
people
can read new words which they use in their study domain and daily routine. For instance
, a survey conducted by Harward University revealed that 75% of human beings prefer to read books
rather than watching
TV. Wrong verb form
watch
As a result
, they have enough knowledge regarding education as well as
they have ability
to read fast.
Paradoxically, the fundamental reason why television plays an essential role Change the article
the ability
for
each and Change preposition
in
everynone's
life Correct your spelling
everyone's
every one's
as
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is
people
can watch daily news with the assistance of this
they might know about what is going on society
and Change preposition
in society
also
spend their leaisure
time watching movies on it with their family members or peers, so it is Correct your spelling
leisure
source
of entertainment. Add an article
the source
a source
For example
, an article published by The Tribune newspaper showed that approximately 35% of mankind love to kill
their time on television serials, films, Verb problem
spend
the
latest news because it provides more information to the public.
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and the
To conclude
, neither reading books
is bad for people
nor watching TV that are
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is
both
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apply
give
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gives
much
benefits to the population.Change the quantifier
many
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