The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts provide information about how many
people
life
Replace the word
live
cities
, Change preposition
in cities
town
, and rural Fix the agreement mistake
towns
areas
divided by who born
in Add a missing verb
was born
Australia
and outside Australia
from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
, there were
an upward trend for Change the verb form
was
people
who born
in Add a missing verb
were born
cities
, at the same time many
Correct quantifier usage
more
people
were
born in Correct pronoun usage
who were
Australia
life
in towns and rural Replace the word
live
areas
than people
who born
outside. Add a missing verb
were born
However
, the number of people
who life
in towns and rural Replace the word
live
areas
was the biggest.
In 1995, the number of people
who born
in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
and born
outside Correct pronoun usage
those born
Australia
life
in Replace the word
lived
cities
, it
was about 50 and 60 per cent respectively. Many Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
who live in rural areas
and cities
were
come from outside Unnecessary verb
apply
Australia
.
People
who life
in town and rural Replace the word
live
areas
have decreased in 2010. Following
this
year people
Change noun form
people's
life
in cities
have increased more
than 15 per cent for Change preposition
by more
people
born in Australia
and 20 per cent for people
born outside Australia
. However
, the number of people
who born
in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
and life
in Towns and rural Replace the word
live
areas
was the largest.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, life, cities, areas, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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