The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts provide information about how many
people
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life
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live
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cities
, Change preposition
in cities
town
, and rural Fix the agreement mistake
towns
areas
divided by who Use synonyms
born
in Add a missing verb
was born
Australia
and outside Use synonyms
Australia
from 1995 to 2010.
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Overall
, there Linking Words
were
an upward trend for Change the verb form
was
people
who Use synonyms
born
in Add a missing verb
were born
cities
, at the same time Use synonyms
many
Correct quantifier usage
more
people
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were
born in Correct pronoun usage
who were
Australia
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life
in towns and rural Replace the word
live
areas
than Use synonyms
people
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born
outside. Add a missing verb
were born
However
, the number of Linking Words
people
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life
in towns and rural Replace the word
live
areas
was the biggest.
In 1995, the number of Use synonyms
people
who Use synonyms
born
in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
and Use synonyms
born
outside Correct pronoun usage
those born
Australia
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life
in Replace the word
lived
cities
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it
was about 50 and 60 per cent respectively. Many Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
who live in rural Use synonyms
areas
and Use synonyms
cities
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were
come from outside Unnecessary verb
apply
Australia
.
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People
who Use synonyms
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life
in town and rural Replace the word
live
areas
have decreased in 2010. Use synonyms
Following
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this
year Linking Words
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people
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people's
life
in Use synonyms
cities
have increased Use synonyms
more
than 15 per cent for Change preposition
by more
people
born in Use synonyms
Australia
and 20 per cent for Use synonyms
people
born outside Use synonyms
Australia
. Use synonyms
However
, the number of Linking Words
people
who Use synonyms
born
in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
and Use synonyms
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life
in Towns and rural Replace the word
live
areas
was the largest.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, life, cities, areas, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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