In recent years, television has contributed most to changing the quality of life of ordinary people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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our
life
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lives
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. As we know, digital
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platforms
are very important for our life. That's why, we use these many ways to reach
informations
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through
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digital platforms. One of the most popular
platform
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is television. A lot of
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company
reach
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to
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people
through
the
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television.
On the other hand
, news channels, funny programmes and
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channels are providing to
people
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lausire
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plausible
time. Sometimes it
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a problem,
however
, many times it
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a lot of opportunities. Some research has shown that
people
learn many things from
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. At the same time, young
people
are using the digital platform for their education.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revolutionized
  • access
  • information
  • platform
  • entertainment
  • escapism
  • awareness
  • exposure
  • cultures
  • improved
  • education
  • learning opportunities
  • development
  • news
  • journalism
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