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it is thought by some that computers are more of hinderance than a help in society. others believe that they are such indispensable device that people would not be able to live or work in their absence. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#computers #hinderance #help #society #device #people #work #absence
A section of
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 believes that technology
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 something rather than providing assistance in any field.
However
, others argue that a person cannot imagine life without their existence. Both arguments need proper scrutiny before forming any opinion and I would like to explicate in the paragraphs to come. On the one hand, the advocates of the first view
deems
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 that
computers
 are
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 people
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 something in society. The main reason
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this
 argument is dependability. Humans are so
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dependant
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 on machines that they do not want to do something by themselves. Folks do not put
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 manual effort to get
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 results.
For example
, two neighbours prefer to communicate through
computers
instead
 of
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 one another personally.
As a result
,
computers
 resist them to go outside because of
communication
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 facility in
it
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them
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.
However
, people who argue that life is impossible without
computers
 have their own valid points. Most of the difficult tasks
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 done by these
computers
.
For example
, from basic calculation to rocket science, all problems
has
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 been solved with the help of
computers
.
Computers
 are imperative in every field.
In addition
 to it,
weatherman
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weathermen
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 forecast weather with the help of
computer
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computers
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. Considering all these factors, a person cannot imagine lives without
conputers
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computers
 as it provides a lot of facilities which are helpful in growing the business. In the end,
although
,
computers
 have some demerits
that
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it
is
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as
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resisting
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preventing
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individual
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individuals
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to do
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from doing
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 something by themselves
but
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, considering the positive factors of technology. I am
in
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of
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 the opinion that life is impossible without
computers
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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