The graph below shows contribution the the economy of turkey by sectors in 2000 and 2016 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts
compares
the contributed field in the economy of Turkey between 2000 and 2016.
Change the verb form
compare
Overall
, Agriculture
accounted for the largest contribution to Turkey’s economy, while
construction was the least in the beginning. Whereas
healthcare and education made up the highest segment, the smallest part was made by Finance, Business and Others.
At the beginning of the period, the proportion of agriculture
accounted for 24%, which doubled the percentage
of government. There were no considerable differences in the percentage
of Leisure and hospitality and healthcare and education, with their figures were
17%. The rate of finance, business and others and construction made up 5% and 3% respectively. Wrong verb form
being
Finally
, the percentage
of trade, the percentage
of manufacturing represented 14%, which was half of that of utilizes
and transportation.
Regarding the data in the second pie chart, healthcare and education overcame Replace the word
utilities
agriculture
to rank the first position in the
Turkey’s economy despite Correct article usage
apply
of
standing at the second position in 2000. The rate of trade, utilities, and transportation was 16%, which was double the proportion of finance, business and others. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, the rate of government accounted for 9%, compared to construction with
10%, and manufacturing Change preposition
at
with
12%. Leisure Change preposition
at
and
hospitality and Correct word choice
apply
agriculture
shared approximated proportions of 14%.Submitted by ngothaovytram on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words agriculture, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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