11.The pie chart below show the percentage of five types of food sold by a supermarket in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

11.The pie chart below show the percentage of five types of food sold by a supermarket in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts display the proportion of fruits seafood, meat, vegetables and eggs sold in a supermarket in
years
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the years
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2003 and 2013.
Overall
, vegetables had the biggest market share in 2003 but it slightly decreased in 2013. Eggs dropped significantly in 2013,
while
the other three products
rised
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raised
rose
moderately. In 2003 fruits had 15% of the
overall
share and
this
set to grow to 17% in 2013. Seafood had nearly a fifth of the proportion in 2003,
this
rose by 2% to 21% in 2013. The meat had the highest
increased
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increase
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over all types of food, jumping from 21% to a quarter, from being the second highest in 2003 to the biggest in 2013 . Eggs
is
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are
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set to become the biggest loser with a loss of 6% from 20% to 14%. In 2003, vegetables had a quarter of the
overall
share, having the largest percentage, and
this
will have a small decline of 2% to 23%, becoming the second most bought food in 2013.
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Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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