some people think that museums should be enjoulyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museum is to educate people . discuss both views and give your opinion
Some people argue that I personally with more than 100
museums
should be Correct article usage
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an
entertainment places.Correct article usage
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while
others believe it is for educational purposes . However
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,
museum
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museums
this
essay will examine the reason.
To begin
with,museums
from the enjoyable perspective, individuals prefer visiting museums
to enjoy their time and observe the differences between past
and present . In other words, individuals travel abroad to visit Correct article usage
the past
museums
in
their vacation because they Change preposition
on
found
relaxation and they feel inspired .Wrong verb form
find
For instance
, the survey done in 2023 at Sultan Qaboos University showed the number of visitors who visit Oman museums
yearlyAdd a missing verb
is
thousands
.Change to singular
thousand
Therefore
, it seems logical that museums
are one of the entertainment places.
On the other hand
, museums
from educational
perspective, it is the best way to learn Add an article
an educational
specially
for students because explaining subjects Replace the word
especially
likewise
history with visible materials it
helps to understand the subject better and it gives students Correct pronoun usage
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a cleare
cleare
idea but, if they study without trip to museum the information in the book is just abstract words . Correct your spelling
clear
clearer
For example
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,
according to
Oman TV student understands the Mona Lisa subject more when they see it in museums
and they know all the details related to this
painting.This
means it is a method for studying and the benefits of museums
for education purposes is
huge,
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are
To sum up
, although
some argue that museums
are enjoyable places because people go there to enjoy their free time. I believe it is educational due to
the learning trips give the learners all the information that they need indirectly.Submitted by almqbalimaryam on
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