Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

There is an increasing susceptibility among criminals to commit aggressive deeds after their first penalty.

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essay will display some of the potential reasons

as well as

the available solutions.

To begin

with, the aggressive environment most

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prisoners suffer from is the main cause of increased

violence

.

in other words

,

prison

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population involves individuals from different backgrounds who committed a wide variety range of crimes, and most of them are

murders

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and gangsters who used to fortify their sovereignty, regardless of the consequences.

Thus

, survival is a top priority for the new inmates,

therefore

, they might become willing to do anything to stay alive, eventually,

due to

these hardships they have to overcome they become more violent.

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can be

examplified

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exemplified

by a survey conducted by a group of Iraqi civil society activists, which claims that the ability to commit

violence

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actions of imprisoned persons is up to ten

time

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more than those who are outside jails.

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example shows that

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atmosphere has a detrimental impact on the jailed people and it makes them more aggressive.

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,

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the prison environment could play a pivotal role in improving the psychological status of prisoners. To illustrate,

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inmates with the opportunity to release negative emotions and eradicate stress will help the individuals inside

prison

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the prison

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to concentrate on more useful things rather than

violence

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deeds, and

this

can be done through multiple ways

such

as building a gym.

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,

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jailers with a well-trained psychologist can significantly decrease the crime rates because they can discuss and share their feelings and thoughts with a specialist, which, in turn, might have a valuable impact on their mental health. In

Netherlands

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the Netherlands

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,

for example

,

violence

among criminals gradually falls

due to

the presence of sports clubs, libraries, and other rehabilitation facilities. What can be said here is that authorities must deal with prisons as

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rehabilitation

institution

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rather than

a

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place

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to punish people. In conclusion,

after

this

essay has reiterated the above-mentioned ideas, it can be assumed that

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situations most

of

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offenders have to deal with on a regular basis

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the main cause that makes them more vulnerable to

violence

and governments must endeavour to endorse all initiatives to tackle

this

issue.