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12.The chart below shows the types of communication training taken by employees in an international company and the reasons why they took part in this training. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

12.The chart below shows the types of communication training taken by employees in an international company and the reasons why they took part in this training. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The graphs below display 5 types of communication preparation that an international organization’s workers did and why they have chosen these courses.
Overall
, part-time
trainings
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 had the biggest market share,
then
 is the self-tuition,
while
 the others are not significant. The reasons why employees choose to do these courses is
primary
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 because of holiday travelling. The course with the highest
overall
 share is the part-time training
at
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evening
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 with 39%, the next
higest
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highest
 proportion is the part-time classes at
weekend
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the weekend
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, which is 17% lower than the ones taken
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evening
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. Self-tuition has the same percentage as the weekend classes, which is 22%. The
last
 two are intensive training with a small minority of 12%, and distant learning a tiny fraction of 5%. The principal motive why they took these classes is because of holidays, with nearly
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half of the total. The next biggest
overall
 share is business travel with almost a fifth,
while
 the reason of personal interest only occupied
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14% and communication with clients
one tenth
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.
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other
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 reason had a proportion of 13%
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