The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The introduction of physical education in

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which was always

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issue has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial

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controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my

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the former proposition appears to be more rational .

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elaborate my views for favouring the positive impact of

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, the first and foremost reason behind

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is that pupils will be more attracted

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physical activities and will gain knowledge about

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of joining sports which will eventually result in more fit juveniles.Another striking benefit in

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regard is that youngsters will have less screen time in school as with the advent of technology projectors are mostly used during sessions to deliver lectures, and physical education lectures will provide enough time for students to spend on their physical activities in open grounds.

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,

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a survey it has been proven that kids who participate in games are less likely to become overweight than the ones who do not join sports.

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fact cannot be ignored. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reasons stems from the fact

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that learners get to know about various

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types

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of physical

excercises

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exercises

exercise

that can be done at home without

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of heavy objects or gym

equipments

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to keep

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healthy and sound. To exemplify, in India physical lessons are complusory and Yoga which is

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art of physical

excercise

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exercise

is part of

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which is making individuals interested in joining Yoga classes and doing Yoga at home. To recapitulate,

according to

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arguements

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aforementioned above, one can reach

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conclusion that the benefits of physical education in school academics are indeed too great.