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the table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

the table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
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The given table illustrates the systems of underground
railway
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railways
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 in six different cities (
London
,
Paris
, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, Los Angeles) which
measured
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are measured
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 by opening date,
route
 (in
kilometres
), and
passengers
 per year (in millions).
Overall
,
underground
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the underground
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station
 in Tokyo had the most
passengers
 in 1927
while
underground
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the underground
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station
 in Kyoto had the fewest
passengers
 in 1981
although
 they
are
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were
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 from the same country. Excitingly, European underground
station
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stations
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 namely
London
 and
Paris
 had the highest
passengers
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number of passengers
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 and the longest
route
 than American underground
station
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stations
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.
To begin
 with,
Japan
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Japan's
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 underground
station
 in Tokyo and Kyoto which opened in 1927 and 1981 served 1927
million
 and 45
million
passengers
, respectively.
Those
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That station
Those stations
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station
 had 155
kilometres
 and 11
kilometres
 in routes
subsequently
.
Furthermore
,
underground
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the underground
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station
 in
London
city
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City
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 opened in 1863 had
the
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a
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 longer
route
 (394
kilometres
) than
Paris
city
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City
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 (199
kilometres
)
that
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which
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 opened in 1900.
London
station
 dealt with 775
million
 customers
while
Paris
station
 dealt with 1191
millions
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million
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. Compared to
those European
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that European station
those European stations
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station
, American
station
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stations
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 served the lower score, for the
route
also
 the quantity of
passengers
, both Washington DC
station
 which opened in 1976 and Los Angeles
station
 which opened in 2001. They had 126
kilometres
 and 28
kilometers
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kilometres
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route
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of route
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 length, they
also
 had 144
million
 and 50
million
 customers,
subsequently
.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words london, paris, route, kilometres, passengers, station, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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