The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table provides underground railway systems information in six different cities based on the date opened,
kilometres
of route, and passengers
per year
(in millions). Overall
, Washington DC has the highest route development per year
. In addition
, Tokyo services more passengers
than others and has the highest proportion of passengers
per kilometre
per year
, while
Kyoto is the less crowded underground train system and Los Angeles scored the lowest services in passengers
per kilometre
per year
.
To begin
with, although
the system was built in 1976, Washington DC experienced the highest rate of route creation per year
with almost 3 kilometres
per year
, followed by London (approximately 2,5 kilometres
per year
), Paris and Tokyo (slightly under 1,5 kilometres
per years), Los Angeles (roughly 1 kilometre
per years), and Kyoto (below 0,5 kilometres
per years).
In addition
, Tokyo is marked as the pinnacle in passengers
per year
with 1927 million
per year
and almost 12 million
passengers
per kilometre
per year
, and Kyoto is the lowest with 45 million
passengers
per year
. Yet, Los Angeles scored the lowest passenger per kilometre
per year
with no more than 2 million
.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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