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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table provides underground railway systems information in six different cities based on the date opened,
kilometres
 of route, and
passengers
 per
year
 (in millions).
Overall
, Washington DC has the highest route development per
year
.
In addition
, Tokyo services more
passengers
 than others and has the highest proportion of
passengers
 per
kilometre
 per
year
,
while
 Kyoto is the less crowded underground train system and Los Angeles scored the lowest services in
passengers
 per
kilometre
 per
year
.
To begin
 with,
although
 the system was built in 1976, Washington DC experienced the highest rate of route creation per
year
 with almost 3
kilometres
 per
year
, followed by London (approximately 2,5
kilometres
 per
year
), Paris and Tokyo (slightly under 1,5
kilometres
 per years), Los Angeles (roughly 1
kilometre
 per years), and Kyoto (below 0,5
kilometres
 per years).
In addition
, Tokyo is marked as the pinnacle in
passengers
 per
year
 with 1927
million
 per
year
 and almost 12
million
passengers
 per
kilometre
 per
year
, and Kyoto is the lowest with 45
million
passengers
 per
year
. Yet, Los Angeles scored the lowest passenger per
kilometre
 per
year
 with no more than 2
million
.
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