The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates the detailed procedure of how instant
noodles
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are manufactured from flour to a sealed product.
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, there are about eight processes for the flour to be made into instant
noodles
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in sealed wrappings. It has to undergo cooking, drying and seasoning before being sent to the customers to enjoy a convenient fast meal. First and foremost, flour is made into dough sheets by mixing with water and oil. After being shaped as strips and squeezed as discs, they will be fried through oil and dried before being seasoned with various vegetables and spices.
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the next step is
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to distribute each dried noodle pack to the container, sometimes bowls but mostly cups.
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, the final process is to label each product with specific printed nutritional information and to be firmly sealed, after which the
noodles
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are ready to be set to sell. It is the manufacturing procedure of the instant
noodles
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we enjoy as a delightful nighttime snack.
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