Technology is the way to execute the discoveries of science to blend it with own need. With technology men created tools and equipment which makes daily life work easy and faster. Technology plays crucial role in education and development of modern world. But technology has its advantages and disadvantages in academic and learning.

Firstly
, I will discuss some of the advantages of
technology
in education. With
technology
for example
AI generated tool Chat gpt students can get a wide range of answers to their queries, how to solve a certain problem, how to prepare a presentation
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how to execute a certain plan or idea. Same as in
this
era of
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and
smart phones
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students can easily get connected to any tutor
any
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institute in any part of the world by sitting in their own
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which can facilitate them to explore their
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and learn easily. By just getting a good
internet
connection
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can get feasible access to any book they want to read. They can keep themselves updated with global issues, constant changes and steady development.
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technology
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their theoretical knowledge
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problems by providing them with different applications and software.
However
, with all the advantages
technology
does have some disadvantages. The crucial change which
technology
brought to
this
generation’s student is their urge to
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something new through reading books in
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. They
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immensely
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on
internet
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and
smart
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phones
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connectivity
that
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they might find it difficult to solve
real life
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problem
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on their own with these facilities. Easy access
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internet
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limits their search for more as they simply get their answer in just one click, they don’t try to read more or beyond what they need. Which
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I think will limit their knowledge to some
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.
Also
using Ai
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tools and other applications suppressed their ability to think on their own and unable to become an individual with
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problem-solving
mind
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. Concluding
this
topic after discussing advantages and disadvantages I believe that
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and harm of anything depends upon
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use
of
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it
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. We should know, to which
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we need to get ourselves
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dependant
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on
technology
and get benefits of it.
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