The charts below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010
The chart below illustrates the cost of consuming goods in France and the
UK
in 2010. The figures are shown in pounds
sterling.
Overall
, it is obvious that cars were the most popular among all the given consumptions while
the less
consumer thing was perfume during the mentioned year in both countries.
When it comes to vehicles Correct quantifier usage
most
UK
reached its peak at 450,000 pounds
sterling and the indicator was less just by 50 pounds
sterling in the other given country. On the contrary
, people used to use perfume not frequently and the expenditure on the goods was 250 sterlings in France and the statistic was less than 150 pounds
in the UK
in 2010. Spending on books was slightly more than 400,000 pounds
sterling in Great Britain, however
, the trend differs with just 100 pounds
in France.
It is experienced that demand for technology such
as computers were
about 380 sterling in the first given country and the figures indicate 350,000 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
pounds
in the UK
over the period. Another important device is the camera and expense was marginally more than 350,00 pounds
sterling in Great Britain while
the index almost halved in other countries in 2010.Submitted by fidansariyeva74 on
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