The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two diagrams illustrate the data about committing
crime
based on age and the proportion of Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
crime
types in the United Kingdom in the last
year.
Overall
, it is clear that
young people did more crime
, and violent crime
was the most common for criminals in the UK.
Regarding the age of people who commit a crime
, there was a large percentage of criminals, aged by
12-28 years old, with the largest number of 20-year-old young people, accounting for 80 per cent of tens of thousands of crimes. 16 and 24 years old were in the second and third places, making up 70 and 60 units of crimes, respectively. Crimes, committed by 28 and older public, were numbered less than 20, with a slight decline by 60-years-old senior criminals.
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According to
the pie chart, violent crime
accounted for almost half of the total number of violence. Although
property and drug crime
were the same frequency,
and made up about one-fifth, public order Remove the comma
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crime
was the least common with less than 10% of the general.Submitted by aleskovamaria02 on
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