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in many work places online communication has overtaken face-to-face meetings. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, in many business places, online communication has overtaken face-to-face
meetings
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. That’s a paramount issue
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 getting worse and worse for people. A significant number of working people have
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 issue
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 their workplaces. Face-to-face
meetings
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 and online
meetings
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 have several pros and cons, which are discussed below. I strongly believe that online
meetings
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 are easier than face-to-face
meetings
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. To kick things off, the first advantage of online
meetings
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 is that since you enter
meetings
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 online, there is no need to prepare your clothes.
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, when my father attends an online meeting, he just wears a shirt and does his meeting.
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, the second advantage is that you do not need to get up early if your meeting is at 9 a.m. and it's not online. You ought to get up at 7 a.m., but if your meeting is online, you can wake up at 8.30 a.m.
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, if someone’s meeting in a different city or a different country, it makes much more sense to do it online
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 of going there.
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, face-to-face
meetings
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 are generally more productive since if your internet connection is cut off at home or there is someone in the house, that means that there will always be noise. In conclusion, the major differences are that
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 it is faster and easier to do online
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, it can be much easier to understand other people
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