TRAFFIC AND ACCOMMODATION PROBLEMS ARE INCREASING, AND THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD ENCOURAGE BUSINESS TO MOVE FROM CITIES TO RURAL AREAS. DO THE ADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGE?
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the
present, Correct article usage
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high
density of Correct article usage
the high
population
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the population
capital
city is Add an article
the capital
a capital
the
major Correct article usage
a
problems
across the world. Fix the agreement mistake
problem
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the effort to overcome Change preposition
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with
the congestion in Change preposition
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the
urban areas, urbanization and industrialization are the promising remedies that the Correct article usage
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authority
should Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
do
. In Verb problem
use
this
essay, the pros and cons of expanding the bussiness
to Correct your spelling
business
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the contryside
contryside
zone will be examined before my conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, urbanization can improve the well-being of people living in rural areas as they do not need to leave their Correct your spelling
countryside
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homes
home
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homes
for working
in the cities, Change preposition
to work
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where
which
they can have a job near their Correct word choice
where
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homes
home
. Fix the agreement mistake
homes
For example
, a new industrail
area in Chonburi province in Thailand Correct your spelling
industrial
provide
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provides
a
numerous Correct article usage
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job's
position for local residents. Change noun form
jobs
Moreover
, they can be happier to stay
with their beloved parents and children Change the verb form
staying
Therefore
, they can spend more quality time with their family, save cost for
transportation and Change preposition
of
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accommodation
accommodations
accomodation
for living in the big cities, Correct your spelling
accommodation
as well as
mitigate the traffic and Correct your spelling
accommodation
accomodation
problems
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accommodation
On the other hand
, industrailization
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industrialization
industrialisation
also
have
some drawbacks. The first drawback is to deteriorate the environment. Because the nature Correct subject-verb agreement
has
need
to be replaced by the infrastructure Change the verb form
needs
such
as roads, high building, and so on, the environment will be polluted by the waste from industries. In addition
, the government need to invest a
enormous amount of state property to construct facilities including hospital, school, and Change the article
an
transporation
. To illustrate, Correct your spelling
transportation
Thai
government need to spend 3,000 million Baht to build all facility for the new industrial zone in Phuket, which Correct article usage
the Thai
these amount
can Change the determiner
this amount
these amounts
use
to save a lot of people from poverty.
In conclusion, Wrong verb form
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although
expanding the business zone to rural
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a rural
area
will be disastrous to the environment and worth a billion Baht, its benefits absolutely outweigh its drawbacks Fix the agreement mistake
areas
due to
effective solution
to Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
high density
problems, and Add a hyphen
high-density
generate
income Wrong verb form
generating
to
local people.Change preposition
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