Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree?
Which teaches more important
skills
group activities or alone I believe both have their benefits .However
, personally l agree with this
statement and this
essay will examine the reasons.
To begin
with,some argue that doing activities alone improves the personality and makes individuals feel independent and free. In other words
, when individual
Correct article usage
an individual
work
or Fix the agreement mistake
works
study
lonely she / they learn how to solve problems without help from others and Replace the word
studies
this
provides them with problem-solving skills
and strong
independent personality.Correct article usage
a strong
For instance
, the survey done in 2023 at SultanQaboos University showed that generally older siblings are more independent than younger and because they are the
older they do most of their activity alone. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
,it seems logical that practice alone teach
individuals significant Change the verb form
teaches
skills
.
On the other hand
, others believe teamwork educates more important skills
because Firstly
, it gives people the opportunity to learn collaboration which is an important skill in the
life Correct article usage
apply
due to
working in a company or any institution forces employees to work with partners.Moreover
, the other significant skill is educate
how to follow the leader which is required in Wrong verb form
education on
the
life Correct article usage
apply
while
in
alone practice can not Change preposition
apply
educates
.Change the verb form
educate
For example
, in football, the players should follow the coach in order to win and if they , not they will lose. Thus
, group activities provide people with skills
they need to succeed.
Correct article usage
the skills
To sum up
, although
alone activity teach
Change the verb form
teaches
skills
such
as problem solving
and Add a hyphen
problem-solving
independent
.I strongly with group activity Replace the word
independence
due to
the collaborative and following leadership skills
that strongly
needed in order to succeed.Add a missing verb
are strongly
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task achievement
Ensure that the introduction clearly states your position and provides a preview of the main points you will discuss.
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Pay attention to verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.
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