Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree?

Which teaches more important
skills
group activities or alone I believe both have their benefits .
However
, personally l agree with
this
statement and
this
essay will examine the reasons.
To begin
with,some argue that doing activities alone improves the personality and makes individuals feel independent and free.
In other words
, when
individual
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an individual
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work
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or
study
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lonely she / they learn how to solve problems without help from others and
this
provides them with problem-solving
skills
and
strong
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independent personality.
For instance
, the survey done in 2023 at SultanQaboos University showed that generally older siblings are more independent than younger and because they are
the
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apply
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older they do most of their activity alone.
Therefore
,it seems logical that practice alone
teach
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individuals significant
skills
.
On the other hand
, others believe teamwork educates more important
skills
because
Firstly
, it gives people the opportunity to learn collaboration which is an important skill in
the
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life
due to
working in a company or any institution forces employees to work with partners.
Moreover
, the other significant skill is
educate
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how to follow the leader which is required in
the
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life
while
in
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alone practice can not
educates
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educate
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.
For example
, in football, the players should follow the coach in order to win and if they , not they will lose.
Thus
, group activities provide people with
skills
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the skills
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they need to succeed.
To sum up
,
although
alone activity
teach
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teaches
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skills
such
as
problem solving
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problem-solving
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and
independent
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independence
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.I strongly with group activity
due to
the collaborative and following leadership
skills
that
strongly
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are strongly
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needed in order to succeed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • communication skills
  • problem-solving
  • collaboration
  • conflict resolution
  • leadership
  • accountability
  • social connections
  • networks
  • adaptability
  • empathy
  • diverse personalities
  • real-world environments
  • team dynamics
  • group cohesion
  • interpersonal skills
  • delegation
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