The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country.
The diagrams demonstrate the proportion of agricultural production in two areas Western and Eastern regions, divided into many varieties,
such
as meat
, dairy, grain, and vegetables
.
Overall
, Eastern countries consume more dairy products
and vegetables
than the opposite side, the amount of meat
consumed is equal in both areas while
Western citizens give their preference to grain over meat
and any other products
.
To begin
with, the Eastern resident's diet consists of meat
and milk products
, 35% and 30%, respectively. Moreover
, Asians do not prefer to eat as many vegetables
and grains as Western ones, and equal to 20% and 15%.
On the other hand
, Westerns consume the same amount of meat
as Eastern citizens and match 35%. However
, despite that over 45% of their diet consists of grain, taking almost half of the statistics. In addition
, the vegetables
and dairy products
are on the lowest points, 5% and 15% respectively.Submitted by filwayy on
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