The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country.
The diagrams demonstrate the proportion of agricultural production in two areas Western and Eastern regions, divided into many varieties,
such
as Linking Words
meat
, dairy, grain, and Use synonyms
vegetables
.
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Overall
, Eastern countries consume more dairy Linking Words
products
and Use synonyms
vegetables
than the opposite side, the amount of Use synonyms
meat
consumed is equal in both areas Use synonyms
while
Western citizens give their preference to grain over Linking Words
meat
and any other Use synonyms
products
.
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To begin
with, the Eastern resident's diet consists of Linking Words
meat
and milk Use synonyms
products
, 35% and 30%, respectively. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Asians do not prefer to eat as many Linking Words
vegetables
and grains as Western ones, and equal to 20% and 15%.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Westerns consume the same amount of Linking Words
meat
as Eastern citizens and match 35%. Use synonyms
However
, despite that over 45% of their diet consists of grain, taking almost half of the statistics. Linking Words
In addition
, the Linking Words
vegetables
and dairy Use synonyms
products
are on the lowest points, 5% and 15% respectively.Use synonyms
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