some people believe that the earth is being harmed by human activity . others feel that human activity makes the earth a better place to live in . what is your opinion

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that human actions are continuously devastating the

earth

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, others argue that human involvement makes

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earth

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a better place to reside by decreasing its deterioration rate. Both

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argument

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need

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proper scrutiny before forming an opinion. I would like to explicate in the paragraphs to come. The advocates of the first view deem that human actions are damaging the

earth

.

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, new technology helps us in many ways, agriculture is one of them. Scientists regularly

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this

section to find better ways of growing crops. Mostly farmers use chemicals in their fields to proliferate the yield in less time which fulfills people's needs. These chemicals stay in the field for a long time because it takes a long period to integrate with the soil.

consequently

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gets negatively impacted and starts losing its quality. The opposite school of

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argues that human actions are making

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a better place to reside. To explain it, there is no doubt that advanced technology improves the quality of life. But new technology needs a lot of raw material in order to

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successfully on

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daily basis

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cable wires and mobile phones.

Raw

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material used for these products

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dumped

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into

river

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or

canal

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along with

other gases which later on mixed up with other gases in the environment.

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,

environment

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the environment

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becomes a victim of greenhouse

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effect

and acid rain. Considering that,

earth

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place to live if surroundings do not

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negatively

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human deeds. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that

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eath suffers from a lot of damage

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human involvement which in turn, affects the human and quality of life they are living

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