The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the amount of
wheat
that
internationally
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sold by three countries from 1985 to 1990.
Overall
, the quantity of
wheat
exports in Australia exhibited a downward trend,
while
European
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the European
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community saw a noticeable
rose
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over time.
On the other hand
, Canada experienced a fluctuation throughout the period. In 1985, the amount of
wheat
export
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in European society was above 15
million
tonnes
, before escalating dramatically between 1988 and 1990, its
tonnage
fluctuated at around 15
million
tonnes
over the period.
Conversely
, the
tonnage
of exported
wheat
in Australia slowly increased from approximately 15
million
tonnes
to a peak of just above 15
million
tonnes
in one year.
Then
its decreasing trend started and continued until the year
of
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1989, before staying at the same level of above 10
million
tonnes
between 1989 and 1990. Canada was the only country that experienced a fluctuation in the total amount of
wheat
exported. Its
tonnage
slightly fell from just below 20
million
tonnes
to around 17
million
tonnes
in 1986, before rising significantly until reaching a peak of 25
million
tonnes
in 1988.
Then
, its
tonnage
turned to its 1985 level in 1990.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, million, tonnes, tonnage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • decline
  • rise
  • surpass
  • modest growth
  • significant
  • stability
  • comparisons
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