The line graphs show wheat exports in Australia, Canada and European Community Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the amount of
wheat
that internationally
sold by three countries from 1985 to 1990.
Add a missing verb
is internationally
Overall
, the quantity of wheat
exports in Australia exhibited a downward trend, while
European
community saw a noticeable Correct article usage
the European
rose
over time. Replace the word
rise
On the other hand
, Canada experienced a fluctuation throughout the period.
In 1985, the amount of wheat
export
in European society was above 15 Wrong verb form
exported
million
tonnes
, before escalating dramatically between 1988 and 1990, its tonnage
fluctuated at around 15 million
tonnes
over the period. Conversely
, the tonnage
of exported wheat
in Australia slowly increased from approximately 15 million
tonnes
to a peak of just above 15 million
tonnes
in one year. Then
its decreasing trend started and continued until the year of
1989, before staying at the same level of above 10 Change preposition
apply
million
tonnes
between 1989 and 1990.
Canada was the only country that experienced a fluctuation in the total amount of wheat
exported. Its tonnage
slightly fell from just below 20 million
tonnes
to around 17 million
tonnes
in 1986, before rising significantly until reaching a peak of 25 million
tonnes
in 1988. Then
, its tonnage
turned to its 1985 level in 1990.Submitted by historicalpen on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, million, tonnes, tonnage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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