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Nowadays the
Internet
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 is the main source of getting
information
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. It is believed, though, that the majority of
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 data is invalid. Despite concerns regarding the credibility of online
information
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, especially on social media, the
Internet
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 is the most reliable source. Simply, because the net there exists an immense number of credible websites, and
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, never in the history of communication fact-checking has been easier than today. There are most reliable
sources
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 of
information
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 on the
Internet
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. In fact, in every aspect of human life, including
news
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, financial data, scientific discoveries, and so on, we rely on the existence of the net. Take scientific papers,
for example
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. Almost every scientific journal either exists solely on the
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 or an updated version of
journal
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 is available online. Every
news
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 agency updates its feed online, too. In
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 regard, our dependence on online material is vital and these
sources
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 have not failed us substantially. The countless number of websites, some in adversary campaigns,
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enable
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 us to fact-check what we read online. It was never easier than today to compare two sides of a story to get a more
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 idea.
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, a hundred years ago, access to
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Communist
news
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sources
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 was almost impossible for a Westerner, or vice versa. But today, any
news
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 source, even
North
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a North
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 Korean propaganda agency, is at the
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 of an average American citizen. Not only is it harder to lie to the public, it is enlightening to read or watch both sides. In conclusion, many online
sources
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 are the most reliable means of getting
information
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.
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 some fake
news
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 websites try to deceive their audience, the countless number of credible
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,
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 the ease of
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 process on the
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, has made
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 deception much harder than
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 past.
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