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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a goodjob. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing softskills is more important. Discuss both sides and give vour opinion

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It is considered by some that being a university graduate is the key to securing a good
job
,
whilethere
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while there
 are others who think that it is better to have
experience
 and soft
skills
. In my opinion, I
believethat
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believe that
 having
university
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 education is essential for academic jobs,
while
 soft
skills
 and
experience
aremore
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are more
 useful in business. On the one hand, many think it is easier for most
people
 to find a good
job
 if they are
universitygraduates
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university graduates
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good
degree
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.
In other words
, having
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 education puts
people
 one step
aheadof
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ahead of
 others who do not and
this
 can be the deciding factor in getting a good
job
. The competition to
getin
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get in
get
 to universities and the increasing number of graduates show just how significant
this
 level
ofeducation
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of education
 is for
people
's future
work
 opportunities.
On the other hand
, having
work
experience
 and soft
skills
,
such
 as leadership
skills
 and
otherinterpersonal
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other interpersonal
the interpersonal
skills
, can
also
 throw the balance in favour of the applicant,
according to
 some.
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For many
 positions there are an overwhelming number of applicants and,
therefore
, it is often
thoughtthat
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thought that
 having relevant
experience
 in that line of
work
 or having acquired useful soft
skills
 that can
bevaluable
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be valuable
 to a company, can put one ahead of the game when applying for a
position
.
Finally
, in my opinion, whether
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high
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a high
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 level
education
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of education
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 or
skills
 and
experience
, depends
onthe
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on the
position
 being applied for. Take
for example
 law, medicine or teaching, it is impossible to
beconsidered
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be considered
 for a
position
 without the required educational background.
In contrast
, in business,
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it would
itwould
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it would
 be more important for a candidate to have soft
skills
 and
experience
 in that line of
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business so
businessso
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business
 they can step into a
position
 without
further
 training and be of immediate benefit to
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the company
thecompany
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the company
 In conclusion, getting a good
job
 requires a relevant background either in
experience
 or
educationdepending
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education depending
 on the type of
work
 and field.
People
 should make sure they attain the necessary
skills
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and ordegrees
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ordegrees
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degrees
 before applying for a
job
 in order to be sure of success.
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