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You recently took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and you had a lot of problems. You complained to the company but no-one has replied to your complaint. Write a letter to the taxi company. In your letter say why you are writing and how you feel explain what happened tell them what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir/Mam, I am writing
this
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 epistle to express my dissatisfaction with the rude
behviour
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behaviour
 of the cab
driver
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. I already raised my concern but haven't received anything back from anyone. My name is Anila. I have booked my ride from Haridwar to Rishikesh on 10
june
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June
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 around 10AM.The first and foremost thing is
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Driver
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the Driver
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 came late to the
pick up
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 point. When I asked him for the reason , he started shouting at me and started driving very fast to scare me. I
have
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warned him that I
will
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 raise a complaint, the he ignored me and started playing loud music in the car.
This
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 20 minutes ride was
worst
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 ever service I have ever received in my lifetime.It has caused me mental trauma and I felt very unsafe in the cab. I am
regular
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 user of the application and now with the experience I have encountered , I am very afraid to book any future rides with you. Please take
neccessary
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necessary
 action
againt
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against
 the
driver
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.
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, there is a suggestion , before hiring a
driver
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,please do a proper background check of the
driver
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.
In addition
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 to that,I advise
to create
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 a form where customer can
complaint
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 right away and feels they are being heard. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Your
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Yours
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 Sincerely, Anila Mahajan
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