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This line grapgh shows the upping tendency in population of Columbia, Yamhill and also Washington in the U.S state of Oregon in the period from 1940 to 2000.

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This
linegrapgh
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line graph
 shows the upping tendency in
population
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the population
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 of
Columbia
,
Yamhill
 and
also
Washington
 in the
U.S
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U.S.
 state of Oregon in the period from 1940 to 2000.
According to
 the graph, it can be clearly seen that all three lines
has
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 increased,
however
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 all of them changed in
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different ways.
Columbia
 had the lowest
population
 at the start of the count,
for
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 about 25000
people
.
This
compared
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 with 30000
people
 in
Yamhill
 and with the highest
population
reffering
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according
 to the graph, in
Washington
 at around 75000
people
. The years from 1940 to 1970 show that the
population
 of
Columbia
 had risen to 36000. It could
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 that it was a
little
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small
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 increase, but
anyway
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 it's about 40% from the beginning of the
growth
.
Yamhill
population
also
 rose by
the
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half of the starting number, from 30000 to 45000
people
. In spite of
this
 two countries had
a
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great
growth
, the biggest increase was noticed in
Washington
, where the
population
 increased from 75000 to 125000. By
the
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2000,
Columbia
 and
Yamhill
risen
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had risen
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 for the same amounts,
like
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as
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 they had risen thirty years ago. In 2000
Columbia
's
population
has grown
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for
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 35000,
Yamhill's
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and Yamhill's
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population
 increased
for
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 60000 from 1940. Even
the
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though the
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growth
 of the
population
 of
Washington
 between 1940 and 1970 was huge, its
growth
 for the next thirty years was sharper, from 125000 in 1970 to 240000
people
 in 2000
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