The three pie charts illustrate how many hours in a British university library are spent by undergraduates and postgraduates compared to other students.
The three pie charts illustrate how many
hours
are spent by undergraduates and postgraduates
in compared
to all Replace the word
comparison
others
Correct quantifier usage
other
students
in the library of the British university. It is clear that
the postgraduates
stay in
Change preposition
apply
longest
than all others. Replace the word
longer
For example
, 51 per cent of postgraduates
are in it over fifteen hours
, whereas
undergraduates just one in ten and the average students
a little bit more - one in seven.
But what is Add an article
a wonder
wonder
, Wrong verb form
wondering
the
number of Add a missing verb
is the
students
who are passing from 8 to 14 hours
is approximately close in all groups and don’t
exceed 35 per cent, at the same time close to Correct subject-verb agreement
doesn’t
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
two thirds
of the undergraduates spend no more than 7 Add a hyphen
two-thirds
hours
for his work in the library, furthermore
only one half
of the common Add a hyphen
one-half
students
pass as mush
. What about Correct your spelling
much
postgraduates
, there are
a tiny minority, how can afford itChange the verb form
is
.
Change the punctuation
?
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