You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter explain why you want to leave your current job describe what kind of job you are looking for ask for some help or advice
Dear Neetu,
I hope you are doing
good
when you find Change the word
well
this
piece of paper. I am writing this
letter to you to get your fruitful advice. well, I am resigning from my current job.
As you know, I am
working here for the past five years. Wrong verb form
have been
However
, it is no more
comfortable for me to work hereRephrase
longer
anymore
. I requested my superior for Rephrase
apply
promation
and Correct your spelling
promotion
pay
raise. He absolutely denied my request. To add, He told me that my pay rate is gonna be $2 less than the regular from the next month. He is giving me extra tasks to be done in Correct article usage
a pay
short
period of time. I do not want to work in Add an article
a short
such
kind of environment where Manager
do not listen to their teammates.
If you can help me to find a job that will be really Fix the agreement mistake
Managers
appriciated
or give me Correct your spelling
appreciated
few
references.I am looking for Correct article usage
a few
a
work where I can explore my skills and have Correct article usage
apply
variety
of opportunities to grasp experience.
I will be waiting for your response.
Love,
Hanime.Add an article
a variety
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coherence cohesion
Be more specific in explaining why you want to leave your current job. Provide examples or specific incidents that led to your decision.
coherence cohesion
Make your greeting and closing more appropriate for a formal letter to a friend. Use a more casual tone.
coherence cohesion
Use separate paragraphs to discuss different ideas or points. This will make your letter more organized and easier to read.
lexical resource
Provide more details and specifics about the kind of job you are looking for. What specific skills do you want to utilize? What industries or fields are you interested in?
grammatical range and accuracy
Proofread your letter for grammatical errors and improve sentence structure and word choice.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
