The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today’s world, It is generally believed that the most significant goals of

science

development cause to improve people's

lives

. In

this

situation, I completely concur with

this

statement and will provide a few opinions below. The first reason for my belief is that it

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more beneficial for health sciences. To explain, with

science

's technological development , we found more effective ways to treat

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ill

such

as more new methods, and medicine.

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, nowadays, we may treat cancer

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extremely effectively which will help thousands of

persons

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people

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who are struggling to save their

lives

. In the past, when

science

have been

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not developed, we

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not any

extrermely

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extreme

methods for treating cancer.

Therefore

, improving

of

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technology

science

which

lead

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to

patient's

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patients'

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life will be safer. Another reason supporting my view is that

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science

's goals can cause personal economics will be more developed.

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with, there are many social platforms

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created by scientists which help every

businessmen

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can exchange information faster.

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, in the past, when

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any

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social platforms, we had many difficulties

to exchange

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information

during

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working or wanting to understand our partners.

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,

with

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a

science

strongly, it makes our have more beneficial to develop economics. In conclusion, it is generally believed that the most significant

goals

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of

science

improve

people'

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lives

. I totally agree with

this

statement because of

improving

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the improvement

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of health sciences and personal economics. It is advisable for many people

be

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able to gain more happiness

for

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in

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their

lives

.