The table below shows the contribution of various economic sectors to Xcountry Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017, and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the contribution of various economic sectors to Xcountry Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017, and 2018.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates the percentage
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economic divisions’ contribution to the Gross Domestic Product (
GDP
) of Xcountry in 2016,2017, and 2018.
Overall
, Industry was the most stable
sector
in terms of improvement and service dominated the
GDP
support each
year
.
To begin
with, the proportion of
GDP
by Industry was 22%. Other 3% of the contributions were added in the following
year
.
This
sector
eventually
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its peak in 2018 by 30%. Unfortunately,
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trend happened
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service
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sector
. Starting with
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65% in 2016, the proportions went down to 64% and 55% respectively in 2017 and 2018.
On the other hand
, agriculture experienced fluctuation. In the first period, it supported 13%
GDP
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. It
then
reduced to 11% in the next
year
and
then
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to 15% in 2018.
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sector
’s domination was quite visible each
year
. In 2016 alone,
this
sector
impacted 65% of the
GDP
while
other sectors were
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25%. It
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slightly decreased in the following
year
but
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dominant. In 2018, the number went down tremendously to 55%, but
this
was still the highest compared to other divisions.
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