People think museum and galleries should work for local artists rather than the other countries. Do you agree?

Today

museum

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and galleries display many

work

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of

arts

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but most

from

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foreigners

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artists

. Personally, I believe

to focus

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that focusing

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on maintaining and supporting local

artists

bring

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more practical values. Maintaining local

artists

is

also

keeping

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people

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the

unique

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of the

nation

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arts

.

To begin

with. Each nation has

unique

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culture,

this

characteristic is

showed

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clearly

to

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the work of

arts

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. Supporting

locals

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artists

contributes

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to

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that characteristic.

For example

, Vietnam is

well-know

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by

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ceramics works of

arts

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.

Secondly

, supporting local

artists

has a positive effect

for

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the economy. By displaying the local

artist

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art products

create

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opportunities for them to

exchanging

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currency.

In

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the other hand they

also

are recognized by

community

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the community

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,

this

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is

the

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big motivation for them to develop their career.

To sum up

. I totally agree that supporting local

artists

is extremely practical and clear. I hope the government

also

consider

this

so that local work of

arts

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are displayed more in museums or galleries.