The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The four charts compare the
electricity
generated in Germany
and France
in 2009. Overall
, it can be seen that conventional thermal was the main source
of electricity
in Germany
, whereas
nuclear was the main source
in France
.
In terms of different electricity
sources, both countries indicated to
produce the same types, Fix the infinitive
apply
however
, the distribution of them is, noticeably, different. Almost sixty percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
electricity
is produced by conventional thermal, leaving the rest almost equally divided by nuclear as well as
the
renewables, in Correct article usage
apply
Germany
. In contrast
, nuclear accounted to be
the biggest Verb problem
for
source
in France
, of
nearly 80%. Other sources showcased between 10 and 14 Change preposition
with
percents
.
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percent
What
comes to the distribution of renewables, these sources have significant differences among the countries. Correct word choice
When
While
France
indicated to have one dominant source
, hydroelectricity, Germany
produced electricity
equally from biomass as well as
wind followed by nearly 20% for hydroelectricity and a small amount of 7% of
solar. In terms of those in Change preposition
for
France
, the amounts produced were not that significant, 10.5% for wind and 8.1% for biomass with nearly 1% for solar electricity
. Furthermore
, none of the countries produced geothermal energy.Submitted by katja.otavina on
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