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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the data on the age groups of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and their estimated proportions in 2050.
Overall
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, both countries'
the
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apply
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elderly and
teenager
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teenage
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 population rates are assumed to exhibit a downward trend in 2050.
Conversely
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, the 15-59 years
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