The charts below give information on the consumption of water by agricultural products in Australia in 2014, and the share of income they produced.
The pie charts above illustrate the proportion of the
water
consumption of agricultural products and the income
they got in 2014 in Australia.
It's clear that the livestock consumed the most water
among
all, Change preposition
of
while
rice needed the least water
.
Moreover
, the fruit produced the highest share of income
and unfortunately, livestock generated poor cash in 2014.
Firstly
, let's talk about the water
consumption. The most of water
went to livestock precisely 36%. It took 21% of water
to harvest fruits, while
, 19% needed to produce dairy products. In addition
, sugar was required only at 10%, several unknown items had 9%, and the least water
went to rice at 5%.
Secondly
, we discuss the income
share of each product. The highest amount of income
came from fruit which was 36%. Milk, cheese and egg made up to 21% of all. While
rice is slightly below milk, which was at 19%, sugar generated 10% of total income
and unidentified items made 9%.Submitted by matcha on
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