The charts below give information on the consumption of water by agricultural products in Australia in 2014, and the share of income they produced.

The charts below give information on the consumption of water by agricultural products in Australia in 2014, and the share of income they produced.
The pie charts above illustrate the proportion of the
water
consumption of agricultural products and the
income
they got in 2014 in Australia. It's clear that the livestock consumed the most
water
among
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all,
while
rice needed the least
water
.
Moreover
, the fruit produced the highest share of
income
and unfortunately, livestock generated poor cash in 2014.
Firstly
, let's talk about the
water
consumption. The most of
water
went to livestock precisely 36%. It took 21% of
water
to harvest fruits,
while
, 19% needed to produce dairy products.
In addition
, sugar was required only at 10%, several unknown items had 9%, and the least
water
went to rice at 5%.
Secondly
, we discuss the
income
share of each product. The highest amount of
income
came from fruit which was 36%. Milk, cheese and egg made up to 21% of all.
While
rice is slightly below milk, which was at 19%, sugar generated 10% of total
income
and unidentified items made 9%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, income with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • agricultural products
  • water-intensive
  • share of income
  • contribute
  • water-efficient
  • sustainable
  • management
  • water conservation
  • policies
  • regulations
  • discourage
  • innovative solutions
  • collaboration
  • challenges
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