You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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This

map chart illustrates the construction of the village from 1995 until nowadays.

Overall

, the spot has changed dramatically in terms of having more capacity to hold a larger number of guests and visitors,

Also

several types of physical activities were constructed on the northeast side. As shown in the graph more housing is expanded to accommodate more guests located in the northwest. Forest Park and farmland have been replaced with tennis and golf zones to encourage people in sports activities.

Furthermore

, shops and fish markets have been demolished, and restaurants and apartments have been added

instead

, so they can handle more visitors.

However

, the hotel and café have remained the same.

Lastly

, a significant improvement was noticed, the fishing port is removed from the front side of the sea, so that the children can have more opportunities to swim without any disturbance from fishermen and provide huge space. In conclusion, the idea of modernising the village by having more physical facilities and enlarging living quarters spaces from 12 to 16 apartments and games competition.It is important to note that there were Some zones were not updated which is considered one of the fundamentals of the area.

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4 paragraphs

198 words

7.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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