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Some people think charity organizations should help people in great need wherever they live. However, others think they should help people in their own country. Discuss both opinions and give your own idea.

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The latest debate is whether
charity
organizations
 should be responsible for
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who
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people
 are not from their
country
. Some
groups
 support the
idea
of
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that
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charity
organizations
 should only help
individuals
 in their
country
. Alongside
this
, other
groups
 of
people
 tend to believe that
charity
organizations
 need to consider helping
people
 wherever they live without any discrimination. In
this
 essay, both opinions are going to be discussed.
Firstly
, the
idea
 that
charity
groups
 should help only
individuals
 from their own
country
 is a better way to complete the organization`s ambition.
This
 belief may be correct if
people
 who live in their
country
 are more helpless than any other nation. Because who would like to help another group of
people
 when your
people
 demand more help?
This
 reason is understandable.
However
,
out of
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this
 reason, I don`t think there is a meaningful one to lean on for
this
 opinion.
Secondly
, another group of
people
 support the
idea
of
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charity
groups
 should help
individuals
 where they live. It`s not a surprise that
this
 opinion has more supporters because it is considered more ethical. When you look at the purpose of establishing a
charity
 organization,
this
idea
 is on point. Because helping
people
 doesn`t include discrimination. In my point of view, supporting
people
 who need money, food and accommodation without giving attention to their religion, race or status is the nature of being a real
charity
 organization.
This
 means that
charity
organizations
 around the world should consider helping
people
 in their region even though those
people
 are not from their
country
.
Besides
this
, if
individuals
 from their
country
 need more help than
people
 where they live currently, they don`t need to feel pressure to help
people
 in their own
country
.
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