The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The shown table represents some data and beforehand ideas for the change in proportion of the
people
aged 65 and above in Use synonyms
Canada
, Use synonyms
Germany
and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
UK
.
Generally speaking, Correct article usage
the UK
Germany
is leading in the population aged 65 and above category from Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the begining
begining
of the period till Correct your spelling
beginning
end
of the period. Add an article
the end
Also
, the number of old Linking Words
people
followed Use synonyms
growth
Correct article usage
the growth
rate
in Use synonyms
Canada
and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
UK
.
As Correct article usage
the UK
it
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apply
represents
in Wrong verb form
represented
table
, Add an article
the table
a table
Germany
Use synonyms
have
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has
highest
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the highest
rate
among the others with 20.45% in 1988. Use synonyms
Also
, in 2000, Linking Words
Germany
recorded approximately 5% growth and reached 25.32, regarding Use synonyms
to
these statistics, it is possible to predict that Remove the preposition
apply
Germany
will keep its leadership and reach Use synonyms
to
30.43% with Change preposition
apply
recording
5.1% Wrong verb form
a record
grow
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growth
rate
till 2030. And, Use synonyms
Canada
recorded approximatelyUse synonyms
5
% Correct article usage
a 5
grow
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growth
rate
and reached Use synonyms
to
20.67% from 16.32%. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, regarding to latest statistics, the Linking Words
prediction of
portion of old Replace the word
predicted
people
in Use synonyms
Canada
reach Use synonyms
to
26.35% Change preposition
apply
till
2030.
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by
Additionally
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
UK
is the Correct article usage
the UK
last
one with its Linking Words
Use synonyms
rate
among Correct word choice
highest rate
other
2 countries. The odds of the old Correct article usage
the other
people
was 14.23% in 1988. Use synonyms
Also
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
UK
recorded Correct article usage
the UK
least
change Correct word choice
the lowest
rate
Use synonyms
among
1988 and 2000 with 0.66%. Change preposition
between
According to
these statistics, it Linking Words
predict
that Change the verb form
predicts
Use synonyms
UK
will reach Correct article usage
the UK
to
20.35% Change preposition
apply
till
2030 Change preposition
by
with
recording approximatelyChange preposition
apply
4
% change Correct article usage
a 4
rate
.Use synonyms
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