The table data below shows the avarage band scores for students from different languages groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010

The table data below shows the avarage band scores for students from different languages groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010
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The table illustrates the breakdown of scores for the IELTS General Test for Listening, Reading, Writing and Speaking,
together with
the
overall
band scores From an
overall
perspective, German speakers get to reach the highest
overall
band score.
On the contrary
, the lowest scores belonged to Malay participants. German speakers led the other three departments apart from reading. They led the listening, writing, and speaking sections apart from reading and ranked first with an
overall
score of 6.7 out of 9.
Although
the French took second place, they showed the worst performance in reading Judging by the lowest
overall
grades, we see Indonesian and Malay students here. Indozian-speaking candidates received the third highest
overall
score with 6.3 out of 9, followed by Malay-speaking candidates. Surprisingly, Malay speakers, who achieved the second lowest results
overall
, achieved the highest results among the four language groups in the reading module.
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