The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied diagram depicts the information about the geothermal energy
that is
used to produce electricity
. Overall
, the picture displays the process of creating electricity
in a step-by-step system.
Firstly
, cold water
is pumped down from the upside, and the length of the hole is 4.5 kilometres. After that, the injection well moves into the geothermal zone (hot rocks) and goes to the production well subsequently
, hot water
is pumped up the same distance as in the beginning into the condenser.
Furthermore
, the heated water
from the condenser goes to the turbine by the power of steam. After some period, of filtrating the water
in the turbine it moves to the electricity
generator. Finally
, the generator which is powered by the previous element produces electricity
in huge quantities, depending on the amount of water
. As a result
, electricity
goes up to the local electricity
tower and is distributed the light to other places.Submitted by filwayy on
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