The diagrams below show the results of a survey from Taiwan explaining how students, wanting to study overseas, chose a university from 1998-2008.

The diagrams below show the results of a survey from Taiwan explaining how students, wanting to study overseas, chose a university from 1998-2008.
The two tables depict the percentage of a survey in Taiwan about
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male and female students’ criteria for studying at a university abroad between 1998 and 2008.
Overall
, ranking, tuition and accommodation fees were the principal reasons for both sexes,
although
there was an upward and downward trend during the time. Interestingly, prospective students did not put much consideration on the quality of lecturers and the newest teaching methods.
Firstly
, there were 97% of boys and 100% of girls decided on a university based on its ranking in 1998, but it declined by 2% and 10% in 2008 respectively.
In addition
to the cost of tuition, as many as 88% of males chose
this
criteria in 1998 and it showed a significant increase to 97% in the following ten years. Having the same trend as their counterparts, the females showed a slight increase from 93% to 95% in
this
category.
Furthermore
, in 1998, both genders considered the housing rate with 92% of males and 91% of females.
However
, in 2008, the former showed a decrease to 86%,
while
the latter rose minimally to 93%.
Secondly
, from 1998 to 2008, lecturers’ capability was only chosen by 13% of boys and 5% of girls, but declined to 6% and increased to 7%
subsequently
. In terms of the latest teaching methods, there were only below 10% of male and female learners who took it into consideration.
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