some people say that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, deaths caused by

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on the

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have increased significantly. Some people are of the opinion that by increasing the minimum age for driving vehicles, we could ensure

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at its optimum level. I disagree with the phenomenon. My viewpoints are discussed in the following paragraphs. There are so many solutions that can help to enhance

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with, the government has to make driving license exams tough. So, people are forced to learn about all

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regulations,

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signs and their meanings. Once civilians are well aware of

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regulations,

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are less likely to occur.

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, the government would need to fix the speed limit

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types.

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, one needs to maintain an average speed of 70 m/h on a motorway which is usually a broad

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but on the other side drivers should not overspeed on narrow streets especially nearby residential areas to avoid

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.

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to that, there should be strict punishment for breaching

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laws. CCTV cameras are required to observe every street's transportation movement and those who break any

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should be penalised with a heavy fine and

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other drivers

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keep

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in their mind and the majority of them are likely to follow all

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which will contribute towards enhancing

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safety

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. what is more, there should be investigation firms involved, whose aim is to track illegal racing activities which are frequently organised in countries

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as India, Dubai, United Kingdom, Canada and the USA. In order to win the race, racers tend to

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overspend

and sometimes they lose control of

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which will

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and

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, it would impact other cars which are probably in their route.

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, it is

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that imposing

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and strict supervision will play a crucial role in ensuring

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safety

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